ELEVATED*

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JOURNAL #36

'Elevated'

in your thoughts

bathed

by your constant love

held

captivated

by your

unquenchable desire

more so than

captured

for you are too

kind to capture

you are more so

one to allure

oh and I am totally allured

a silly woman

drowning in your words

never wishing to break the surface

and swim to the shore

away from all your lovely sentences

never

for you

I am

a dolphin

always aching

to remain in your sea

warm

safe

loved

and free

to do with you as I want.............

(Oct. 25, 2009 308am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

written for the man who has captured my enchantment and made it his own.

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Muhammad Naveed Ahmed's picture

A beautiful and thoughtful poem...welldone pale-winged poetess, welldone...
I too am elevated,
Always am,
As you never leave me,
Ever alone.
You are as Elvis Presley says:
"Always on my mind."
And other than God Almighty,
And His prophets,
There is nobody else,
So much on my mind,
You never let go of me,
In my hours of wakefulness,
Or even in my sleep.
I confessed my love for you,
Long before you did so,
You 'got' me through your sweet,
And deep introspection,
And then by saying,
How much more we both can be stronger,
If our like energies converge on love,
Divine, true, selfless love,
For now, for the future and forever,
I feel I am the one,
Much more elevated.
---You know who--so why disclose it? Haan?

kj1's picture

I enjoyed this. Nice.