HOPE FILLED REJOINEDER

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JOURNAL #35

bleed no more

wounded heart

of before

heal and be whole

of those rib knocking

bruises of the prior

aches' sore

much balm from your words

has been wrung

much joy out of pain

has softly now come

smile through your tears

and divorce yourself of

those long, harsh empty years

today is so fresh sweet and

shiny all anew

come turn your aching back on what

was

take my hand

and walk with me

out of the pain

because don't you know

tomorrow is the most beautiful

word in the world

begetting such hope

it comes in second only to love

and we both know

you've saved up plenty of that........

(Sept. 11, 2009 634am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

rejoinder to Muhammad Naveed Ahmed's poem To My Heart.

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Hi Melissa, I am Shazi (dr Shehzad Latif) Naveeds best earthly friend. We go back to the school days in 68. Yes we are ancient. I am happy that you have lifted his spirit and this poem is yet another in many that I have viewed overnight. I like it, my only prayer is that he takes someones hand and crawl out of the cocoon he has weaved around himself. Keep writing and keep smiling. If you have the chance see "Nostalgia and Nostalgia2" written for him by me.
Cheers and lovely writing
Shazi