HOW YOU SO BEAUTIFULLY HAVE STUN ME!

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JOURNAL #35

how you stun me

you beautiful, beautiful man

your words were the flowers

your thoughts my candy

to be so brilliantly beheld

with such a purity of heart

you humble me with your

honest admiration

you leave this poet

without her own words

nearly

but I clasp them with my

glorious tears tracing across my

wet pursing lips

I sit so embarrassed

that I ever doubted how you care

you are more courageous of heart

than any ancestrial warrior kin

you ever could have had

I have to make you believe this

you are an elixir for my soul

my heart's fondest alley

I sadly can not match

this beauty of self you have

shared

but I love you today sir

more than all the days before

this added up from behind

the best of who I am I must confess

is and always shall be

in a word

Yours....................

(March 2, 2009 755am)






Author's Notes/Comments: 

a poem for every girl's dream man! (perhaps)

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awesome
poem
i loved it :*)