WHISPERS AMONG KISSES

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JOURNAL #35

eye loving mesa

romantic shadows

waltz themselves

across the foot hills

as proud as flamenco dancers

swaying and bending

in a loping sensuous manner

the eyes cast themselves as

lovers

and there

our thoughts lay down together

in a field of passionately

blooming dandelions

whispering among our kisses

just thinking about my possible

reaction to such reality

produces almost the very same

effect on my body's ability

to function properly....................

(Feb. 28, 2009 656am)








Author's Notes/Comments: 

was in a romantic mood and I think it shows! smiles........

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Afzal Shauq's picture

hmmmm soo romantic way.. mans you are really sweet look wne smiles and your eyes.. and your thought about what you added hee is impressive, loving , heart touching and even brain knocking..well done dear melissa he great for that much sweet poem....best of luck

rosalind's picture

Nice,an expression of self in a state of bliss.