oh so gingerly
between our two wants
this moment forms
we are co enchanters
swinging far above
all those more modest thorns
the vines we twine
are sculptures of grace
in their very own mystic right
you are a sorcerer
and I
your sorcerer's apprentice
the brew we keep together stirring
so to better concoct
is but a questionable mix
of desire and refuge
perhaps
ruined
but only if
left on the stove to simmer
for too long..........................
(June 26, 2008 430am)
So i've never really enjoyed anything from this. Everyone always think they can rhyme and get away with calling it poetry..
...but your sonnet.. your sonnet is a breath of fresh air..
Thank you
you are welcome..........
cheers.......M.