BETWEEN TWO WANTS

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JOURNAL #34

oh so gingerly

between our two wants

this moment forms

we are co enchanters

swinging far above

all those more modest thorns

the vines we twine

are sculptures of grace

in their very own mystic right

you are a sorcerer

and I

your sorcerer's apprentice

the brew we keep together stirring

so to better concoct

is but a questionable mix

of desire and refuge

perhaps

ruined

but only if

left on the stove to simmer

for too long..........................

(June 26, 2008 430am)

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Prince Abamba's picture

So i've never really enjoyed anything from this. Everyone always think they can rhyme and get away with calling it poetry..

...but your sonnet.. your sonnet is a breath of fresh air..

Thank you

palewingedpoetess's picture

you are welcome..........

cheers.......M.