his words
on their expedition over so many pages
how they moved so beautifully
in their crossing of two languages
succinct and deep
are their precious meanings
I found myself awash
in remorse
and powerful empathy
as I weeped right along side
those many loves lost
amid insights gained
the hair pin curves of life
woven with hope and disillusionment
all landmarks to a flesh, blood and bone being
gracing time with his mission's journey
is a pleasure just to get to ride
along behind his eyes
with his heart
and through his hand
I uncap my pen to you Afzal
the only way I know how
with this inpromptu poem
you are a sunburst off the largest star
man has known
and with but your words
you can not imagine
the subsequent heat that resonates
in the very soul......................
(written May 24, 2007 1130 pm)
thank you verrry much dear friend and the best poetess ever I noticed... the poem for me is sooo sweet and heart catchy and it will be preserved in my comming book to with a big note of thanks... you deserves... alot ...yours afzal shauq
Outstanding ode to a fellow poet!