the sweetness swirls
so to fall
dizzy from such heights
as these passions I've papered with you
construct a hybrid
for such a love
whose honesty can not so easily be fogged
by life's constant fluxuating storms
in each our valiant harbors
sways such voluptuous peace
the inner strength beckons
come love me
be my port
and I shall be your ever dutiful
ship
that holds in its gleaming bowels
the finest riches in all the world
my very own unspoiled love for you...............
( written July 7,2006 140am)
my favorite line is life's constant fluxuating storms, yes without the storms we would not appreciate the bounty of love. I love your metaphor use here..