where the paintings of tides left by the uncommon flinch
unhappily hang
one will subsequently observe the holes that were drawn
in the unresolved theory of the last big bang
know that astronomy and art are not bonded brothers of
ease to be placed in just any similar place
yet their origin's steps like that of their confused
creators are not so difficult to locate and retrace
the taste for the experiment of magic leaves bittersweet
mirror able memories to die restless and alone in such
a stark and chillingly haunted hall
yet their ( the paintings) obscurity is felt solely by
and in every rash spirit that is light enough to draw
such talents though are rarely recognized by the
collective viewing all
but those who do themselves experience the pain beneath
their gentled beauty are still blinded to exactly what
the hidden inner artist once so sadly saw
and that is where the true rub lies
in all the portrait's empty faces, through out the
carefully landscaped pebbly sands and in the unseen
yet modeled look of the haunted artist's so death like
filled eyes
for at that last creatively inspired moment
what he saw and was able to capture was not life so much
but the finest form of an almost flattering death
as he envisioned its so loving abuse
his tears trailed slowly after each sad brush stroke
and every shallow breath.................
(Jan 31, 1993 am)
This is a deep poem where the literal meaning must not be confused with what the poetess wants to convey. Every reader will have different interpretations according to what he or she can comprehend from this somewhat unfathomable ocean -- an ocean of many meanings condensed in so few lines. But then this is poetry. And who can use words to define an obscurity more convincingly than a good poet or poetess? The imagery, the similes, the metaphors, the nuances, the abstract allusions -- all speak of a vivid imagination belonging to a brilliant and intelligent mind questioning what many would not ever pause to reflect upon. Well done O pale winged poetess! May God give more flow to your thoughts, widen your imagination's horizons and give your poetic talent more flow.
As you know who...so why disclose it? Smiles.........