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OH BLAKE
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JOURNAL #27 I find I am quietly poor
without the rich expressive sound of your words
unmetered and lost
without the cadence of your narrative map
almost too inexperienced at being myself
but so anxious still
to smell the roses you can so easily plant in my fertile mind
and they growl like your tiger burning bright
restless am I to retrace the portrait path of your word reflected
life
that lead you to be the post humous celebrity
you, whom is so highly regarded, have become
what blessings sculpted you
what nurturing environment constructed the clarity and
poignancy of your gentled wonder
allow me but these own barely clad words of mine
to place upon you
the magic siphon I should need no doubt
to better procure your commendable influence
in my own presence of mind writing
this is my humble little thank you
for giving me an educational peak
at your every day view
Oct.22,2002(11pm)
I wish one day to be able to write as expressive as u do. That is my only wish. Keep shining forever lady.
I know this i'm supposed to b critiquing your poem right now but i tried replying to the critique u wrote me about my poem Dear God but the email u provided for me was hidden therefore i couldnt send u an email with my reply so i thought this would b the best way. Please email me back at virgomonkey88@hotmail.com
wow i cant thank u enough for taking the time and writing all of your wise words as my critique! reading what u had to say really helped me a lot im sorry it took so long for me to respond but i have been really busy with school hw and work. I truly appreciate your caring thoughts and advice it means the world to me. I'm glad u have become a new fan of my work lol i think u r the only one who really understands everything that i have to say and exress in my poems. I really appreciate keep in touch?
~Lots of Thanks~
Janey