WITH ME POETRY AGREES

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JOURNAL #22

the hills are there for the trees

shadowing the growth of the breeze

the wind whips at my knees

I smell the will of the seas

you have no idea how I live to appease

this muse in my soul that binds even as it frees

Just what the soul poet sees

Beauty as only true beauty believes

the will of the page's silent pleas

write me!

as such words only further feed such needs

that is the assignment such a maladjusted mind

receives

Poetry I've learned is quite literally me

a compliment it seems

that never fully leaves.......

(Dec.24,1999)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I love how every ending line rhymes with the same sounding word. I do not write these sort all that often. This time it was with the 'EASE" sound.

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I LIKE IT

i like your poem so much because my poem "life" was actually longer like yours but it didnt really fit in with the meaning of the subject life, but your poem creates a vivid detail of your passion for poetry :) i like it and im glad i made someone smile since most of my poems are more of a negative emotion :))


im just a teenager but ive been writing poetry since i started primary school , so its more of a talent than a subject to me. Other than that i love art and sport! My last year in school and hoping to travel to Japan because i always dreamt to :3 ( hopef