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LOVE'S SWEETEST DEATH(erotica)
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JOURNAL #22 you make me see rainbows
and moon beams of ungranulated light
the very darkness of your eyes' desire for me
tell me ancient stories of a love forgotten but now
so proudly re-shared
your tongue feels so sensuously sneaking
like a thief after all my feminine secrets
beneath you in a cloud of motion
via our misted bodies' brush
I languish in the grope and slide of your hands'
simplest touch
see my nostrils flair
your familiar scent
a fragrant harbor for my unloading delight
desire is approaching
a freight train that can be sensed but not stopped
I am a cauldron of enchantment
you hold the key to the mix meant of my savory brew
be my thundering eclipse
pour your love into my soul as you pour your seed
into my inviting feminine port
and my sweet lure will become the ultimate pinnacle
to all your earthly male undoing
you make my wick flame and smoke
my sweet talented warm fingers pluck at the one string
you have let fray at your heart's most welcoming
harbor
kiss me to full life
and bring us as close to LOVE'S SWEETEST DEATH
as only you my love can do
I flood at the sight of your love's unharnessed
approval of me
me in all my imperfections
blooming into such beautifully ageless gold
I too melt as such
trembling beneath you
at both ends of our souls' latest carriage
we bond
gloriously naked
two bodies blended as one physical
lifting into the realm of the spiritual
in our final ashes' moments of divine oneness
we fall
blissfully unharmed into ecstasy's sweet untempered joy
thankful for the chance we had yet again
to travel to such exquisitely private heights
where only two true lovers get to go
together but alone
such sweet trumpets shall trill at the golden
announcement of our mutual ascent
the sweetest death allowed to man
OHHHHHHHH.......keen.......physical release!!!!!!!
(Jan. 17, 2000)
I am surprised, even shocked, that a love poem of such exquisite quality as this one does not have more comments. I can only ascribe that, in fault, to the readers at postpoems, and certainly not to the poet of this poem. This is a magnificent love poem, and I believe it is destined to be remembered as a classic!
Starward
Hi! I found your work via PostPoem's random email feature, and I'll definitely be back for more!
I thought I should mention a few typos I found though...
"see my nostils flair"
nostrils?
"I am a culdron of enchantment"
cauldron?
"I too melf as such"
melt? meld?
"in our final ashes' moments of devine oneness"
divine?
"blissfully unharmed into ecstacy's sweet untempered joy"
ecstasy?
Don't get the wrong idea though... I did like this piece. I just know that with my own work, if I've got friends and family reading it and they all tell me how nice it is, and then I find a typo later, I feel like they let me walk around with my fly open without bothering to tell me :) And so, instead, here I am opening my big mouth.
woah!! this was definately a great piece of work! i don't think there's anythign more to say about it other than it's a great piece of work!!
~keep on keepin on~
~luv gemstone0412~