You have written this poem in the style of Ralph Waldo Emerson. It uplifts the soul and encourages those who dare to go where even eagles are apprehensive to fly. Excellent work.
Thank you most sincerely for them. You pour poetic rubies in my grateful lap. I must wonder though does the conduit truly deserve such praise. most graciously I thank thee........you know who....... smiles
could likely be the language barrier but allow me to assist a little here.
when we find in others what we cannot yet see in ourselves that creates conflict in us.
is like gazing into a funhouse mirror we see but we don't really see clearly
when we embody courage criticism received, kind of loses its power to hurt us for we then see it as something to better us. Think of this like silver that is folded seven times to make it stronger. Noise destroys our peace of mind if we allow it to, the key is to rise above it from the inside of one's self and allow the noise to be, without disturbing one's internal peace. At times that can be kind of tricky I'll confess. Creativity brings us as conscious humans together. Post poems I believe is proof of that very statement. Those who point out the finer things in life, that which cannot be purchased, are very easy to see and last but not least wit unto itself finds not easy to see paths quite easily to bring all the threads of such forces together to groundswell for the rest, a most beautiful resource that of which is the poetry that all of us in one way or another write whether just for ourselves, together or for all the world to read. I hope this off the cuff summary helps you for I never wish to leave a brother behind. Most Graciously this is where I lead you. A most sincere M.
A POEM IN EMERSON'S STYLE
You have written this poem in the style of Ralph Waldo Emerson. It uplifts the soul and encourages those who dare to go where even eagles are apprehensive to fly. Excellent work.
Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.
Pen name:Emmenay.
Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7
Initials: M.N. Ahmed.
I bow humbled by your comments Sir Poet ........
Thank you most sincerely for them. You pour poetic rubies in my grateful lap. I must wonder though does the conduit truly deserve such praise. most graciously I thank thee........you know who....... smiles
Wonderful C's sis
... but sorry I couldn't get the meaning..Be well Be Happy ~bro b~
©bishu
Don't fret brother Bishu,
could likely be the language barrier but allow me to assist a little here.
when we find in others what we cannot yet see in ourselves that creates conflict in us.
is like gazing into a funhouse mirror we see but we don't really see clearly
when we embody courage criticism received, kind of loses its power to hurt us for we then see it as something to better us. Think of this like silver that is folded seven times to make it stronger. Noise destroys our peace of mind if we allow it to, the key is to rise above it from the inside of one's self and allow the noise to be, without disturbing one's internal peace. At times that can be kind of tricky I'll confess. Creativity brings us as conscious humans together. Post poems I believe is proof of that very statement. Those who point out the finer things in life, that which cannot be purchased, are very easy to see and last but not least wit unto itself finds not easy to see paths quite easily to bring all the threads of such forces together to groundswell for the rest, a most beautiful resource that of which is the poetry that all of us in one way or another write whether just for ourselves, together or for all the world to read. I hope this off the cuff summary helps you for I never wish to leave a brother behind. Most Graciously this is where I lead you. A most sincere M.
Thank U Thank U Thank U Sis
..for your kind explanation to this dimwit b.. I now get a hang onto this one... Be well & Happy
©bishu
"...championing challenge conspiculously..."
crescendos nicely - this poem made my heart soar. Thank you for this, palewingedpoetess ~ Star ~
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I live to find the wings in words that can make others
as well as my own heart soar.......... I am so glad I succeeded for you. I stand servant to your cherished compliment. A most gracious M.