She had everything.

She had everything.



She had everything

A beautiful face

A boyfriend

That showed

Signs of abuse

In their early

Dating days.



But she couldn’t bring herself

To walk away she was so in love

With him! She would’ve done anything

To please him she just wanted

To make him happy in every way!



Until one day he pulled a gun

On her and told her he’d kill

Her if she ever thought of

Leaving him. She

Thought he was playing with her

When he made that statement.



Until one day things went too far

Before she could say a word

Her abusive boyfriend had

Pulled out a gun and shot

And killed her mother!

And then shot her point blank

Straight in the face

So she is now known to many

People as the woman



Without a face!

But she doesn’t deserve

To be known as that

She’s more like a hero

For people in the world

Today!



May, 26, 2005

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i wrote this about a woman i saw on tv today. her boyfriend was real controling and he killed her mother! then put a bullet through the middle of her face. and now half of her face is missing. so i thought it'd be cool to write it. it might help somebody who's being a abused!

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An interesting retelling of a news item, but no "poetic" quality. Just because it is structured in a vertical column with oddly broken lines does not make it a poem.