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~Just Look at Her~

 

The beauty queen 

presses a long-stemmed rose against her perfect belly.

 

The bottom of the stem extends down to her vagina, 

which we'll assume is perfect, too,

because even though we're all in the dark, 

there's no use kidding ourselves. 

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©22 September 2014 - 9:26am — owlcrkbrg
22 September 2014 - 2:03pm — allets
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ROFLMAO - Ow!

The "Exquisite Croch" I needed a surrealist's joke today. Messieur Wit and Pun Master. "In the dark" ha! ha! and ooooooh... Enjoyed this one. Honestly done. U aim poems at us, fire, and we die shot through - Lady A

 

 

 

 

23 December 2014 - 4:17am — owlcrkbrg
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HEE HEE

Glad you got a laugh,Lady A.

 

"There is no good writing, only good editing."

23 December 2014 - 5:48pm — allets
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Truth Told

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Your poetry is unleashed in layers of wisdom. Superficially, there is humor, subliminally there is a slug at truth somewhere - and the laughter is not ha but ouch! - Great writing this - Always enjoy your offerings - Stella
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24 December 2014 - 11:47pm — owlcrkbrg
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Thanks again Lady A

I appreciate the encouragement.

 

"There is no good writing, only good editing."