Supermoon

~Super Moon~

 

The moon got huge
and erased all the stars
so you decided
we should leave the pool, 
go indoors,
and make love in the dark. 

 

And, as we did,
moonlight and water
played together like children
until dawn spread the fog around.

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S74rW4rd's picture

Exquisitely superb!  The

Exquisitely superb!  The juxtaposition of an astronomical event with the lovemaking creates a new relationship, with a new power for both elements.


Starward

nightlight1220's picture

This is like a journey

This is like a journey through the union of two souls. Beautifully expressed. Nice subtle/natural vibe.

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

allets's picture

Simply Said

The moon and stars relationship was almost haikuesque - like a painting clarity - nice ~~A~~