Ire

~Ire~

 

I left the foam Buddha

in the rain, 

and when the sun 

came out 

he was

steaming. 

 

D. B. Tompsett

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S74rw4rd-13d's picture

Superb.  Like one of my

Superb.  Like one of my favorite poets, J V Cunningham, you compress the words so tightly, but with the effect of extremely profouond insight or emotion.  Bravo!


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Well done! 

Well done!