~When Pyrocumulus Last in these Western Lands Bloom~
This late summer evening as I listen
to the cricket's
"cree cree
cree cree
cree cree"
I imagine myself with cricket legs
and what a glorious noise
I could make if I rubbed them together
as I lie on my back in shadows.
Maybe after a while
a beautiful woman
who also has cricket legs
will be attracted
and join me in the bushes.
Together,
the volume of the
glorious noise
will double,
and we will be happy
and she'll smile
easily.
Our racket might very well disturb
the people for several miles around,
and cause them
to gather up guns and dogs
to hunt us down
and silence us, but as they near,
we will
SPRING INTO ACTION!
We'll get up on our cricket legs,
and bound away into perhaps
a large field of tall, green, corn
where we will lie, keeping
our legs spread apart
for the sake of silence,
and, while prone that way,
we quietly giggle
as I climb on top of you
and proceed to play,
while the people
urge their dogs
to sniff us out, but the dogs
don't really want to find us
because they consider us to be
too weird and creepy to behold, while
to the north
and south of us,
in these western lands,
pieces of the sun unwind
from the forests,
and the pyrocumulus bloom.
The shift from the third
The shift from the third person reference to the woman in the fifth stanza to the second person in the sixth stanza is a bit jarring, and I had to re-read it twice to understand the flow, but otherwise the poem is a really good use of metaphor to make the appropriate point.
Starward