I am Lost on the Sea
With no place to call my own
I drift aimlessly through the fog
Just searching for my home
My appetite says left
My intellect says right
In which direction should I sail?
On this dim and forlorn night
I feel the pages splitting
As body and soul drift apart
I am left broken and beaten
Depressed and without heart
My body collapses
Under the agonizing weight
I plunge into the ocean
I am resigned to my fate
As I hit the frigid water
My being slowly disappears
My whole life is reduced
To my anger and my fears
I struggle like a child
I swim frantically for the top
But my efforts are futile
And finally…I stop
I am left as nothing
And as nothing, I shall stay
I fall into unconsciousness
As my soul drifts away
I don't know maybe you could improve it a little but i like it. Nice idea!