Untouched

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You're not blind... you see me here..

Each time you hide... It brings a tear...

Push me away... when I come near....

Just let me stay... let me be here....

You're not that slow...  you're well aware...

But how I feel... you just don't care...

Can I please come... stand over there...

Let me come close... without that stare...

You're not happy... I hear you moan...

You look so cold... so hard like stone...

Too hard for me... To stand alone...

But, alone I stand... and turn to stone...

                   - Lo Ruhamah

Author's Notes/Comments: 

"There's nothing like the sound of hundreds of voices screaming in unison."
- Kefka Final Fantasy 6

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Kristen Welsh's picture

Wicked, never seen anything like this. Keep up the amazing work, but change your picture in your profile... :P Chao

oh_so_odd's picture

I also remember when you wrote this one, it also means alot even ifyou dont remember why. but these 2 poems i critiqued really do mean a lot to me. all of your writing does.. um yeah i'm done being silly now Molly