And Your Point Would Be???

You told me that your're tired of all

We have and are and do.

I watched you stiff-necked drive away.

I don't know what to do.

Your moves were masterful and planned

Like a chess match with a pro.

Your thoughts were settled on yourself,

And I just told you so!

You said you need some breathing room,

That I am smothering you.

What you really meant was that your love

Has room for only you.

Your ego is gargantuan.

It stretches out of view.

You could never love a woman quite

As much as you love you.

You said you're leaving me for good

As you turned your back to me.

I couldn't help it.  Just blurted out,

"Well duh!!  And your point would be???"

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is another one I found in a notebook.  LOL  I remember how thoroughly ticked I was on this particular day!

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Sarah Armistead's picture

*laughing* VERY NICE... I can definitely relate! Keep up the good work...
> Sarah

Douglas Lazard's picture

Jessica, I really like this... Makes me remember when I acted like that! I hope I'm not that way anymore, but every once in a while I do feel a little selfish...Hee Hee!! Very well written1
Peace and love ~~~~ Dougie ~~~

Butch Lesley's picture

A thoroughly tick woman with a sense of humor...dangerous combination...

owlcrkbrg's picture

HA!! HA!! Great! (I'm wiping laughter tears from my eyes). Thanks for this!

Dan


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Robert Wilson's picture

This one is in a little more serious vein but your sense of humor keeps bubbling through. I like that. --Robert