Quiet pillow talk

this perfect plan

am i not letting it

happen its the way

its supposed to?



im counting sheep

1...3....4...7....8

and im not falling

asleep to the beat of your

heart



i'd hold you

but im afraid of

rejection

and this fragile

heart is not ready

for failure



but the failing

failure of my

insecurities is costing

me everything

im promising not

to lose

Author's Notes/Comments: 

"its just the pillow talk talkin"

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Josh Glasgow's picture

i'd hold you
but im afraid of
rejection
and this fragile
heart is not ready
for failure

That's wonderful. Beautiful stanza. I wish we were still friends. Or could still talk anyway. We had about a good week there, and then it died. And nobody seemed to complain. That's kind of disheartening. Like a lot of things.

Marianne Chrisos's picture

and im not falling
asleep to the beat of your
heart

insecurities is costing
me everything
im promising not
to lose

wonderful. and elvis sings on.