1/3

i've give up

every one third

of my breath

when you catch

me when i start

to fall

beautiful girls

are all around

and still your

attracted to me

or pretend to be

i'll let life take its

course and

everyone in the end

of this dance

will have a better

understanding

of what is going on

and with all the confusion

we'll be right at home

finding the multiples of

8 loving you every

second of the day

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Marianne Chrisos's picture

this is really good. and the end makes you think.

i've give up
every one third
of my breath

very nice.