should i?

should i cry everytime

i see that you love her

should i be screaming

everytime i know your

beaming?



should i be jealous

everytime you say you love him

should i squeal when i find

out that your gonna

see him?



should i cry everytime

i read your love notes to eachother

should i be the happiest

when i'm not even part of

your merry fairy tale?



should i be happy for you?

becuase i am

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this is for mimim and josh. i'm really thrilled for them. i love you both

(thanks josh for the ending)not how i would have liked to end it but it works so much better

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Josh Glasgow's picture

Wow. Yes, I wouldn't be lying if I said that you're a very nice person. Which I have said before, actually, so I guess I wasn't lying would be a more accurate thing to say. I must say, however, that whilst reading this poem, I was half-expecting it to end with "Because I am." Or something to that effect. But I was wrong, and I am just as happy in my incorrectness as anything. It's your tiara tonight.

Marianne Chrisos's picture

I love you. Thank you molly.