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idiot father

its just another day

      its just another life

  i'm confused

       and i'm so lost

i'll learn to get over it

                 move          on





do you understand me?

        i'm screaming in your face

still you are

     ignoring  

          me



do i have to s p e l l it out for you?

                   waht do i have to do

     to show you

                how much

i    HATE

                            YOU

Author's Notes/Comments: 

yay i did it. i dont like my dad at all. he doesn't know it. but i really really despise him. wow that feels good

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 11:35pm
©22 August 2002 - 4:37am — oh_so_odd
15 May 2004 - 5:55pm — Daniel P. (not verified)
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I really like this poem because I dispise my father too...You are a talented writer...and I like this style...

18 November 2002 - 3:39pm — The Geekman (not verified)
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Mol,
It feels good to let it out doesn't it.

Now ask yourself why you hate your dad so much. Is it because he "left" you when he left your mom?

Is it because he found happiness and you didn't?

Is it because you feel he betrayed everything he taught you?

So you have all this hate inside...you feel abandoned by him when you need him. Yet...you haven't said a word to him to indicate how you feel.

Should he maybe hate you?
What have you done for him to love you?
Do you talk to him?
Do you write to him?
Do you give him the time of day?
Maybe you would do better by actually communicating your thoughts directly to him.

Try it. It might actually help to mend the broken heart(s).

Geekman