Destined to die

I sat and watched her cry

But had no idea that

She was soon

Destined to die



Screams filled the air

of all of her pain

She takes the blade

and pushes further

As the tears stream

down faster



I try to move

But my body stays

Paralyzed with fear

I bring myself together

I grab her in my arms



Attempts at saving her

Are slim

Becuase her wrist

Wont stop bleeding



Cold and wet

And covered with her blood

I sit and start to cry

Cuz she was destined to die

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Abbey Reeder's picture

omg, this is such a sad poem. it's very good, but very sad. i really like it. it really touches my heart. God Bless you with peace, love, and happiness.

Joshua Derek's picture

I hate reading poems about suicide. It's.. gah, why is there nothing else to write about? I don't do this, this I do not do. But some people.. some people every single one is "I picked up the blade". And I don't get it, and I don't like it. Please don't write anything that includes the word "blade" and the word "blood" ever again. Maybe one or the other. But not simultaneous. Can you do that for me? It makes me shudder.

Amanda Keldie's picture

hmm...this brings back some memories