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Pllleeeease notice me!!!

Smile at me

Noticec me

This is all i ask

Just please look at me

Notice me

This is all i want

Just please hear me

Notice me

This is all i need

Is just for you....

To notice me

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i wrote this hoping this guy at school would notice me...but it didn't happen :(

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 11:35pm
©16 December 2001 - 12:59am — oh_so_odd
4 February 2003 - 11:26pm — Sheena Zinzer (not verified)
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I realize this was for some guy, but it reminds me of my someone. Thanks for writing it kid.

11 June 2002 - 10:44am — Jody Pratt (not verified)
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I think people (guys) notice you more than you know. I noticed you and you stood out to me for one reason or another.

8 August 2002 - 11:35am — running_with_rabbits
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i feel ya

i wish the people who see me... didn't
and those who don't..would

but thats for now

good job
well worded

ash

p.s

have you seen that comercail when the guy is thinking
"look at me " and then she does and he looks away and then three seconds later he thinks "look at me again"

its goood

Much Love

Ashley