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!Just cant help but die!

I shudder at your touch

The one that use to hold me

I tremble at your glares

That use to be so comforting

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I weaken with each word spoken

That use to speak love to me

I lose my head when i hear ur voice

That used to soothe my pain

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I die when i see your face

That use to excite me inside

I die all over again

I just can't help but die

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i'm nto sure who this is about..i jsut wrote it off the top of my head..something i probably would have written a while ago...but now its okay but i still wrote it

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 11:35pm
©23 November 2001 - 4:25am — oh_so_odd
15 July 2003 - 6:15am — Rebecca Shea (not verified)
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Molly, I'm not sure whether or not you're writting about a guy, but I can relate to it with one of my friends. Everytime I see her, I think I really do die all over again... Rebecca