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2 seconds of Peace, Gives me 5 seconds of Love
2 seconds of peace is all i want
Just to know everything is okay
To know when i wake up tomorrow
It'll all be like it use to
3 seconds of Happiness is all i want to feel
To smile at something great
To know when i smile
Someone has fallen in love with it
4 seconds of courage is what i need
To face my fears
To know that when its done
Its done
5 seconds of Love is all i want to know
To feel when someones smile
To know someone cares
To know with just 2 seconds of peace
I get my 5 seconds of Love
Hey,
I got this in the "Daily random poem" thingie, it was really relaly good. And by the number of critiques on it I'd assume others think the same! Great,
~God's lil angel
There is great strength & determination in this piece. It is obviously written by someone who knows exactly what they want.
Well said.
Amy Riberdy
Gentle is the night♥
Mol,
When I read your poems, I see two things you desire the most...1)love and 2)happiness. Its interesting how those go hand in hand and when you don't have one you don't have both.
Your poems are filled with longing for love, crying out for happiness, and revealing the hurts and "diss"appointments in life. Baby, those will always be part of your life. How you deal with them is what will make it or break it. Writing poems might help to express what you feel but I sense that you are so repressed that you haven't quite learned how to constructively express...I mean communicate your feelings to those who are actually the source of what you are feeling. Take me for example...I know I have hurt you but have you expressed it to me??? NEVER!!! Try actually communicating your thoughts and feelings to the people who have affected you. You will find great release in it. It actually feels good to unleash those feelings and forget how you think the person will react.
Remember we are all human. Oh, and so far none of us are perfect. We will all end up hurting someone with what we say or do, no matter how hard we try not to.
Keep writing,
Geekman
molly, great poem, hang in there...