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You know
You know i love you
With both my heart and soul
But lately you've been rejecting me
You've been pushing me away
If you loved me so much
Than why can't i stay?
Why wont you let me hold you
Like you did before
You're pushing even further
Than i ever thought you would
Here i am just waiting
Hoping you'll change your mind
Here i sit just wishing
Wishing you'll be mine
Is that to much to ask for
Is this to much for you
Cause once you said you loved me
And i said i loved you too
After all this rejection
After this is through
You may not want to love me
But i promise
I'll always love you
I like the flow of this poem. Very nice. I hope you figure things out.
kelsey taylor
Jeez!
Is this all you can write about?
Let me sum it up...
You want to be loved.
You find all people suspect...a.k.a. assholes!
You feel rejected.
You don't add anything to the relationship.
Here's a clue. If you want to be loved; really, really, really loved to the point that you are convinced that you are actually loved, then you will have to give something to the relationship. Nobodyz going to beat your door down just to give you a hug.
"Oh, I just can't do that. I would be so...so vulnerable." Yup! That's right girl! You gotta put something into it to get something out of it. Just like a vending machine.
HI~ again lovely poem,sweetie!your to young and pretty to wait for some jerk,theres people dying to meet someone special like you OK~ dig LOL great writing L&P