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When I Wake up
When i wake up
who will be there to
kiss my cheek "hello"?
Who will make me
my waffles and pancakes
with my favorite flavored coffee
Stolen away
where are you now
broken hearted
you've left me
watching the clock
waiting for the day to
start over again
die another day
die another day
Who will be there
when i go to sleep?
Who will kiss my cheek
and whisper me to
fall asleep in
tender loving arms?
Will i find a love note
when i drink my coffee
Will you be here
when i wake up in the
middle of the night?
Stolen away
where are you now
broken hearted
you've left me
watching the clock
waiting for the day to
start over again
die another day
die another day
breathing, I'm breaking
so fast without you
Talking, I'm taking
my last breaths without you
Wow, this was really good. Seriously, I liked it a lot. I have one constructive, comment though.
Breaking, i'm breaking
so fast wihtout you
taking , i'm taking
my last breaths without you
I read it (it took me a while to realize otherwise) as: "breathing, I'm breaking/ so fast without you/ Talking, I'm taking/ my last breaths without you" Sounded better that way.. to me. Just saying.
But still, great stuff. Keep on existing.