Hold on

This is a war for all the broken hearts
This is a night to take in the beauty of the stars

Take what you have
And hold it close
Take what you want
and never let go
There is a life to fight for
There is a love to die for

Hold on
Never let go
These nights are for
Healing the scars
That will never show

I will show you
The world that you don't know
It's under your feet
Close and within your reach
It's all that you have
And will ever know
It's all that you need
It's all that you never seen
It's there
Just believe

Take what you have
And hold it close
Take what you want and never let go
This is a life to fight for
This is a love to die for

Never let go
Never let it show
Keep what's
In your heart
Just for you
Only you
To know..

Author's Notes/Comments: 

simple enough and i use a lot of simple rhymes. but people tell me its good.. i try to take pride in my work but compared to so many others i dont think im that good.. open to suggestions...

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X_jewel_X's picture

wow

in my opinion "good" is an understatement.. that was totally amazing! kepp writing the way you do.. it works really well for you..^^

SSmoothie's picture

Who ever told you it was good

Who ever told you it was good was right! The first two lines are gorgeous! Nice work!


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