oh im losing you
do you feel it too
you don't hold me like you used to do
you don't look at me like i'm the one for you.
And you break my heart
With those side ways glances'
So many time i've begged the truth
And given you those chances
to cut me free,
and let my love be'.
But you can't give redemption to me.
you say you don't know
But I know you're letting go '
Talking in your sleep
While my lonliness grows-
You say you don't want me to leave
So I pull you close
and you say that you can't breath
Please, please,
Give me some relief,
Tell me the truth
Cause' the truth is a release'.
I see the fear in your eye's
When I ask you to be real
Why can't you just give it to me
And give all my life back to me.
Love this!
"But you can't give redemption to me" I know a lot of people have lived this and you wrote it so well...thank you!
*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james
Yearning To Be Close
and not finding it is hard when the one you love pulls away. your open prese style is evolving into something wonderful. - allets -