To me, you're like a cloud of smoke
I touch you and you disapear,
You leave me wondering what I did wrong
You leave me lonely baby.
And waiting, always waiting
On whatever move you make
One false foot leaves me alone
All it takes is one mistake,
Cause when you look at me
You're not seeing me.
And when I speak
You're not hearing me.
So I trace my finger
Down the back of your neck
And I kiss your tattoos
And i watch every step.
To try find out,
How I can get back what's lost
At any price darling
And at any cost
Nice poem and I liked how you
Nice poem and I liked how you relate the relationship as a cloud. I've been staring at clouds all week (these damn tropical storms). Great work!
That Place
where you get locked in and alone wanting the loved to love you knowing it is over. Hellish place. It too eventually fades like smoke and either you fade too or are free of those clouds forever. ~ Lady A ~