What you don't know.

Boy i'm going to tell you something,

That you don't want to know,

About love,

About loss,

About letting thing's go.

 

And I'm going to tell you

Of all the thing's I have heard

When you were trying oh so hard

To muffle all your words.

 

My eyes are going to whisper

A secret

 to your heart-

And I am going to make sure

That it tears you right apart

And I am going to make sure

That my messege travels far.

 

And it will speak of nights

where I have laid awake

And tried to ride the anger

And the wave of pain,

And told myself that I know better

To forget about your face

And hold my chin up once again

In hope of a better day.

 

 

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Incompl's picture

"Ride the anger" and "Wave

"Ride the anger" and "Wave the pain" amazing lines. I hope the tides are kind <3


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Carcass's picture

Finding peace in anger

I like this poem a great deal and it has a great rhyme scheme/rhythm to it.  Great imagery as well.