Boy i'm going to tell you something,
That you don't want to know,
About love,
About loss,
About letting thing's go.
And I'm going to tell you
Of all the thing's I have heard
When you were trying oh so hard
To muffle all your words.
My eyes are going to whisper
A secret
to your heart-
And I am going to make sure
That it tears you right apart
And I am going to make sure
That my messege travels far.
And it will speak of nights
where I have laid awake
And tried to ride the anger
And the wave of pain,
And told myself that I know better
To forget about your face
And hold my chin up once again
In hope of a better day.
"Ride the anger" and "Wave
"Ride the anger" and "Wave the pain" amazing lines. I hope the tides are kind <3
Let your teeth show
Finding peace in anger
I like this poem a great deal and it has a great rhyme scheme/rhythm to it. Great imagery as well.