Cool crisp air breathing down
her naked back; leaves caught
in her tangled hair. Disarrayed
and vulnerable, she jolts
to consciousness to find her legs
covered in blood, her feet
submerged in the swampy edge
of a muddy pond bank. Whistling
echoing noises of forest beasts
ring in her ears. She hastily jumps
to her feet and runs and runs,
stabbing holes in the soles of her feet
with twigs and rocks and other
miscellaneous things. Naked, raped and
abused she reaches a street made
of dust and dirt, hoping to find
a soul to save her but no one
is near. Weak and desolate she
frantically limps down the road
in pain, breathing heavy with fear
and exhaustion; looking for any sign
of human existence. Collapsing
out of breath she moans and reaches
for the sky: as if clutching onto
an angel’s embracing hand. And seconds
before her last lung contraction
a 1956 pickup truck wheels around
the corner, clearly driven
by a drunken fool, bounces over her body,
plummets into a ditch and
bursts into flames, scorching
fifty acres of nature.
Ditto.uummmmmm??
lol, this was an..interesting piece of work? It's amazing how our minds tend to think sometimes eh'?
~Chelsea
Holy Shit this is badass. As you read this you find yourself racing through the poem uncontrollably, unable to stop or even slow down. You are inside this woman's mind, on an accelerating, chaotic path to her destiny. Just as you feel that your emotions and energy are spent, the truck somes from no where, sending another surge of adrenaline through your body, jolting your mind, since, instead of resolution, the piece has reached a fatal, stunning climax. WOW!!!!