A Tearful Confession

there she stood in the middle of the world

it was changing all around her

but she didn't understand



the wind blew her hair to the sides

and a few strands caught her mouth

she looked up to sky for answers



but all there was were clouds and birds

disintegrating, falling to the ground

catching her every astonished breath, this was death



a tearful confession

it cured the worst draught

she prayed the Lords' mercy

for souls that might fallout

and not make it

for they fake it

its not who they are

this tearful confession

is all they have



with all this violence thrashing before her eyes

a single tear dripped down her cheek

they thought she was weak ,but she was only meek



'What is happening?' she cried out to God

Falling to her knees in the middle of the street

she clasped her hands and confessed to the Lord



a tearful confession

that cured the worst draught

it saved her the last minute

before she was thrown out

of the Lords kingdom forever



and the world kept on spinning

as God's team was winning

all the while filled with tearful confessions









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Rhiannon Clayton's picture

Hi,
I am always glad to hear about a fellow christian whose
life didn't just change,wasn't only saved ,but "radically" changed by God.
You have an amazing gift for exspressing poetically
faith and your love of God.This poem truly touched me
and I would love to chat online sometime,any support in
the world of spiritual warfare is always beneficial in today's society,and furthermore I am nutty and weird too,
but that's okay,because like you said,the cuteness balances me out.Try this quote on for size,"I speak sarcasm as a second language",and "build a bridge and GET over it."

Ernest Bevans's picture

What did she confess? How did the confession affect
her life and or others?
how did the lord reatact to the confession?
who is God's team?
and how was this conflict resolved?
You have a wonderful Idea for a christian novel.
Keep Writing - Keep the Faith