The shores of untouched sand

I know you,

I see the purest of what will be,

I am not but a shell that contains the love of my own thoughts,

Is it a trap?

Is it my paradise?

Is this all for not?

What can it be?

I feel the streams that warm my skin,

Yet "unknown" is what I see,

I touch with both hands,

I feel the soft surface,

Its joy floods my mind,

As if to be a storm of love,

The water seem calm,

The epic smooth cool wind is its own hyperbole,

And i see the land from the top of this crow's nest,

I can almost taste it,

Seeing is believing,

Yet I still cant believe,

I cant touch,

But I can see,

hear,

Smell it,

what i still am is not able to be taken for my own,

The cool breeze of your hope is the tingle up my spine,

I feel it,

The hope,

The love,

Yet It isn't real enough,

What do I need?

To have it?

It is right there,

The shores of my life,

The riptide keeps me from swimming ashore,

I reach my hand out to receive the help i so need to swim ashore,

I see all of your hands reaching to save me,

But the hand I am looking for is still being kept form me.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

What you want wont always be there to help you. There is always people there to help reaching to help, but they might not be the hand your looking for.

View nkaralus's Full Portfolio
nkaralus's picture

It is great to know people

It is great to know people read your work makes it all feel worth it 


Love Jonas,

Jesster's picture

Yeah, that certainly makes a

Yeah, that certainly makes a difference. Interactive is fun. Enjoy yourself!


Copyright © JessterStarshine

Jesster's picture

I can relate to this. Welcome

I can relate to this. Welcome to PP! :)


Copyright © JessterStarshine

nkaralus's picture

thx I never knew of this

thx I never knew of this site. I feel so much better writing here. I have just moved and it is becoming my home away from home.


Love Jonas,