You can see the deepness of a persons soul through there eyes...imagine if you could see things clearly before you where conceived... would you wanna be born?
Dear mama.....
Do you remember when everything seemed right
When daddy held you in his arms tight
Together ya'll wished on the brightest twinkle in the night
You blew out the candles & he blessed your womb with a Precious seed
I grew inside you like summer Lily's in the spring
I know it was hard raising me & my brother alone while daddy's Was away in the military
You crumbled in pieces you didn't acknowledge me anymore
you became invisible in your own skin starving too be free Like a bird
You spreaded your wings & flew away from me
I wanted your affection but you push me too the side like a Whore
I watch from across the room as your eyes lit up like you Where perzest with depresson
He manipulated you into fallen in love with him
He got you curled around his finger like eve eating lies out The palm of his hands
How come you stood in the path of his flames I belong too you
Hurry save me before its to0o0o0o0.*sigh* well its to late
I died buried in a shallow garbage bag of dirty diapers
Washed away like rain on a windshield wiper
You can see the deepness of a persons soul through there eyes...
Imagine if I could see things clearly before I was conceived I would of chosen never too be born.....
interesting piece but I wonder what the mother actually was feeling during the situations all going on. news exerps never go into that they sum up something and noone ever really knows the full story except the person involved in it. It's sad either way. powerful write!
Wow! This is argubly one of the best poem that I have ever read in the world! I promise you! The deepness of this poem has so much quality that I can't ever start to describe it. The story, the similes, metaphors and visual descriptive imagery had all fell right in place, and it definitely touched my heart. I am personally going to print this poem out before I get off of the internet and archive this. I will always keep this piece close to my heart! Good job and may GOD continue to bless you forever! Peace!
Wow. This one was deep, and honestly i dont know my answer...lol. Would i chose this, could i chose some of it and not other parts...lol. T his one realy made me think and that always makes for a great read for me. ~Rae