OnE Of A KiNd....
I'm that sensual butterfly waiting for that special guy
He'll be the right one for me accept me & all my flaws
He want break down my mental walls with emotional rain
He'll wash away all my pain & gain access 2 my heart
He'll treat me like gold mold me into his queen
I'll mold him into my king we'll satisfy each others needs
He'll be the man of my dreams we'll get it on under the sheets
He'll teach me what making love is all about It'll be no doubt
Hes a faithful man i want have too lust anymore
He'll push up on me with his stick in my honey pot
like a stream of bees twirling inside my vanilla cream
He'll drink all of me
The moon will sing a beautiful tune
He'll have the pleasure of being the first 2 make a tear fall from
inside my eyes
Though i ain't a virgin he'll devirginize my heart & it'll realized love
at first site he'll make me feel high inside like a dove in the sky
Rose petals falling down on my soul we'll fit each others skin
like a glove
I'll be the only women he thinks of in the spring as his queen
A beautiful leaf off a blossoming tree
A Caterpillar forming into a sensual butterfly the rarest kind
He'll ever find me one of a kind......
~"Though I ain't a virgin he'll devirginize my heart & it'll realized love
at first site he'll make me feel high inside like a dove in the sky
Rose petals falling down on my soul we'll fit each others skin
like a glove."~
Now that was tight! No pun intended. LOL
I like the visual imagery upon this piece. I felt that your emotions were written very well. I like it! I also liked the story behind these lines here. The metaphors and similes were unbelievable! Girl you have talent! Good job and may GOD continue to bless you forever! Peace!
PS > This was a good piece for a freestyle!
i like dis poem. it tells how evry gurl wishes she could find dat special 1