Soothed by this
Untouchable
spell bound curse
this cool breeze that
leaves me
Mesmerized staring
deep off into the beauty
of the
Midnight sun and the
star filled skies
what do you see when
searching deep inside my
Eyes,tiny drops of rain
Inbetween tropical colors
of the
Rainbow
Birds flying through the night
around the magical light of
the moon
Rise
Experiencing and
Enjoying the flight of the
Zodiac above and slightly below
the beautiful green
Earth that I walk upon
There's no way to decribe a piece with such visual descriptions. I liked the way you told this story here. You always seem to pull out your artistic paintbrush and tell some very good stories. Good job and may GOD continue to bless you forever! Peace!
Oh my good Lasohnda! This is one of your best pieces, ever! The wording in this was so good. Rainbow, tropical colors, zodiac above....wow. I really love this poem. How refreshing!