Bitter Cherished Memorys Of You

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Zoria Harris

Bitter Cherished Memorys Of You

My hearts beating like drums intensly
its rambling on!My pain sticks like syrup
The feeling aint sweet its sicking to the surface of me..
I'm going numb my mind is dumb,It dosen't know how
to weep while leaving me in peace..
I wanna scream as high as the ceiling top..
I wish these demons would stop!
vanish begone like my hapiness in this bitter song..
Its storming,raining pouring!
Black tear drops are fallen beside my soul...
Your presence they stole you..nolonger you sit beside
My flesh is crawling little antz,My mind can't bestill...
Your my skin to my bonez..
Noone can replace you my precious gold!
Your worths as much as a princess's throne,even
thats an understatement of my love..
Your a unique dove!
I'm cold,Shivering missen your warmth like milk..
You where my comforter my chocolate chip cookie..
You where sweet rich & soothing..
That evaporated in the ground with my blood..
I'm dried out your moisters gone..

Like my clothes you protected me like sheep
Over the fence i count ,I lost count unable to dream..
Sourrounded in sadness trying to xscape the storm
Inside me these thoughts wont rest..
I need a healing beyond menting..
Beneath my feet my head hangs remincing,over your
Smile it was golden..
One day i hope to hold you before i get old..
My burdens shine brighter then the sun!
My cloudz are nolonger soft there harder then stone..
Emotions are consuming me like a disese..
My soul is fading!I'm a rotten corpeses..
Dead to the worldz understanding!
Don't get it twisted..I love your brother..
He's my king..
Like an angel harp beauitful music plays in my heart..
His wings shield me!
His gigglez free apart of my weakness..
But my thoughts can't xscape you..
There permantly stuck there like your name
tatooed to my arm..
The memorys of you are locked away securly
in my heart,Only i have the key..
I'm tired of singing these blues of the cherished
moments missed of you..

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I liked this piece, because of the content that stood between these lines. I like the way you expressed your emotions for your lost daughter. I even saw a deep display of visual degrees of imagery, along with some nice similes and metaphors that put the finishing touches on this piece. Good job and may God continue to bless you forever!