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closet boxes 2006 In this abyss of lonliness
can you tell me who has won
among the fights and lonely nights
and all thats come undone.
We have lost and have not gained
but the feelings havent changed
it seems so different without you
my lifes been re-arranged.
And summer nights hold winters chill
without you lying there
and walls that once came up so fast
abandoned, leave me bare.
In this abyss of lonliness
is either of us free
i've never been so miserable
is this the way it has to be.
if it were my poem which it isn't yet its still good lol :P
the ending line would read
"as when you lay beside me"
not
" is this the way it has to be"
but yeah other then taht thanks for stealing my poem, erg writers block lol
I loved it babe
very much i might print it out
and frame it, and put my line at the very bottom of the page with a dash and my name just to spite you for wrting when I cannot and must
Much Love
Ashley