Uncomfortable

So things feel uncomfortable

and i am to blame,

i meant nothing by it

things wont be the same.



Nor should I expect it

but I took a chance

now well walk around

and do this old dance.



Of quick secret looks

not saying the wrong things

for fear of the fall out

that it all will bring.



And no one may notice

and noone would care

i wish it was simple

but I wouldnt dare.


Author's Notes/Comments: 

I have no idea

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running_with_rabbits's picture

this line is to long and flows like a piece of crap so to speak

"not saying the wrong things"

it needs to be short and it would sound better as "not saying a word" but then you lose the things brings rhyme

and the rest is amazing luv
i feel this way right now

ash


Much Love

Ashley