Conflicting Thoughts

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I left my car keys on the table



It's true my mind is still asleep



And my car is in the shop



I need to go back to bed.



I'm gonna have to walk,



I need a cup of coffee



But it's only two blocks down



And I need to drink it black.



The excercise is good for me



What a lousy Monday morning



Feels good to stretch my legs



And I have bags under my eyes



At least the day is sunny



I can't stop yawning.



Maybe i'll go dancing tonight



Where's the converter, my soap is on



I feel like going running



Why do Mondays seem so long.



I love Mondays.



I hate Mondays.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Okay for those of you that didn't understand this you have to read lines 1,3,5 etc, together and 2,4,6 togather and you get two seperate viewpoings, conflicting thoughts first thing in the morning.

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running_with_rabbits's picture

k not bad but not your best

"What a lousy Monday morning
Feels good to stretch my legs"

love that bit and the end

ash


Much Love

Ashley

9inety's picture

yes that's it exactly... daily routine... it's clashing, then it goes easy...
then it gets crazy again... very well founded. I like the way you use the parallel of emotion...


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot