Where Will I find

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The Five W's

Whare is the love that I once knew

where not the pain you put me through

where is the promise you can keep

where is the reason not to weep

where is the lesson i've not learned

where is my love to which I turn.



Where did I take for granted all

where is the pride before the fall

where is the folly that is mine

where time that I shall fall behind

where is the guilt known well to me

where will I find your love for me.

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running_with_rabbits's picture

some lines need work IE lines two and seven(missing the word you) and ten and others have typos IE line one

but over all not bad, like I said
I think I shall like this file

ash


Much Love

Ashley

Belinda Taylor's picture

hey nikki
well i liek this poem...it speaks the truth...to me anyway. but then so many do....HAHA...no but seriosuly this was a good poem...i like it :) truth can be heard only peopel have to listen to it.
go figure
Belinda