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You Wonder
“don't leave me now
don't let me go
I'm in love with you
and you don't even know”
It just seems so appropriate
That you’d say this all for her
You really wonder why I can’t love you.
I could never be with you
When the one to cause the end of us
Would just be you.
I just can’t be second best
When I deserve the top
And won’t settle for less.
Don’t wonder why
I just can’t love you
And I say goodbye.
i love the first four lines
the rest is ok but no tas good in my eyes
but good job
ash
Much Love
Ashley
This is a good piece, all except for that it cuts off at the end, otherwise nice poems, thanks for critiqueing one of mine!