One More

Automatic teardrops

their running through my veins

psychopathic analyzing

driving me insane

looking for your reasons

the answers running low

falling down and burning up

why couldn't you just go



why can't this be enough

this semi-coloured place

convince yourself

that your not drowning

and little do you know

the calender is burning

and you lost

you just lost one more.



two faced weary freakshow

hide beneath your mask

feel like your turned upsidedown

but too afraid to ask

the mirror is reflecting

someone you've never seen

inhibitions turned to dust

in a place you've never been



and you tried to fall

end it all and

tried to see

the other side

you tried to find out

what your seeing

but what you did

you can't abide.



why can't this be enough

this semi-coloured place

convince yourself

that your not drowning

and little do you know

the calender is burning

and you lost

you just lost one more.



why can't this be enough

this semi-coloured place

convince yourself

that your not drowning

and little do you know

the calender is burning

and you lost

you just lost one more.



Automatic teardrops

you just lost one more

weary freakshow

you just lost one more

you can't abide

you just lost one more

goodbye.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Ash said that the best ones make no sense so here's for you hun.

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poetvg's picture

awesome poem

Belinda's picture

hey nikki
well i am going to critique this while u sit beside me...LOL....not bad hunni. i dont mind it ....but it would prolly help if u sang it..*hint* but love the lyrics :P
keep up the good work
Belinda

running_with_rabbits's picture

i like it but i love stanza'z one and three

and i totaly understand this

it sounds like my mind

ash


Much Love

Ashley