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My head is full of negatives

and waves of dissappointment

you really want to change me

but that's not for you to do.



I can't change who I am now

though you plead it everyday

I won't have misguided faith

play the role of fool again.



I can't just be like everyone

i'd have nothing left to show

and when time becomes my demon

I won't be standing all alone.

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©7 August 2002 - 7:21pm — Nicole.J.Burgess
17 October 2002 - 12:51am — Karly Barrett (not verified)
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hey i really like this poem :) its excellent!
i like the whole idea of sum1 not having the right to change you, very true...
two lines that stuck in my mine are

"and when time becomes my demon
I won't be standing all alone"

thanks for sharing!

10 August 2002 - 1:29am — running_with_rabbits
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i hate the middle bit but the rest is good

and to correct you
you are like everyone
everyone is sad and down these days so
sheep BAHHH

ash

Much Love

Ashley