You look at me like it hurts
as if you might die with a glance
turn to stone if you stare
but like the pain would be greater
if I was never there.
You hear my voice and you cringe
as if the pain makes you cry
makes you tear your own heart
but still life would be sensless
if with my words you did part.
You feel my hand and you burn
as if you'll waste away at my touch
and blow away in the night
though you never knew a girl
who felt so right.
You breathe me in as if you'd choke
as if the scent of autumn would be death
leaving you frozen on the ground
but you can't remember
when so hard your heart did pound.
You taste my lips like their doused in venomn
as if you'll find your poison as death
while you fall without a cry
yet you still love me whole-heartedly
your true demise.
i like it scept for the whole does and did and do's bit lol
erg child ;p
but yeah i feel ya yet again
taking my muse!
ash
Much Love
Ashley
ok nikki u have peaked my curiosity....u have got me wondering who u worte this for. Do tell. All and all pretty good poem
Belinda