Searching

You still say you lost me

but you didn't

you let me go

there's such a difference

in what you say

and what you know.



In what you plan

and what you do

in what you planted

and what never grew.



In what you wish

and what you got

in the results

of why we fought.



In where we came from

and where we are

where your a beggar

and i'm a star.



Where your dreams

are nothing more

I don't see what

your searching for.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Don't even ask

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Laura Maguire's picture

I love this poem!It's so catchy,well done and keep it up.

Laura Maguire's picture

I love this poem!It's so catchy,well done and keep it up.

Laura Maguire's picture

I love this poem!It's so catchy,well done and keep it up.

running_with_rabbits's picture

I LOVE THE FIRST STANZA!!!!!

and the second

oh hell i love them all

scept it ends to fast and the last one is kinda odd but

wow

ash


Much Love

Ashley

Belinda's picture

nikki,
either way..i like it. :) and i think u did a good job on writting it. but a word of advice no one knows what they are searchign for until they have found it...its a funny way of life that no one can explain. and if u know what u are searchign for and u find it, it will never be what u are actually looking for...dont ask...lol....good job tho
Belinda